the costs of intrnational travel are decresing and tourism is growing . what are the advantages and diadvantages.

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It is true that the cost of
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
oversaea
beyond or across the sea
overseas
overuse
has become
chepar
relatively low in price or charging low prices
cheaper
these day
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these days
this day
and it has
growing
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grown
the tourism industry in many nation's.
the
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The
growth of
tourism industry
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the tourism industry
has own
marits
be worthy or deserving
merits
and
demarits
a mark against a person for misconduct or failure; usually given in school or armed forces
demerits
and the following essay will discuss them in details. From a number of
reason
Suggestion
reasons
,
Accept space
,
the
advancement
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Advancement
in tourism industry brings
lot
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lots
of
benifits
financial assistance in time of need
benefits
for countries.
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firstly
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Firstly
, it
creats
make or cause to be or to become
creates
lot of job opportunities
for
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For
local people.
as
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As
many hotel and
restaurent
a building where people go to eat
restaurant
built along

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural exchange
  • Intercultural dialogue
  • Economic benefits
  • Infrastructure development
  • Personal growth
  • Environmental impact
  • Cultural dilution
  • Economic dependence
  • Global travel trends
  • Fluctuations
  • Commercialization
  • Authenticity
  • Vulnerable
  • Sustainable tourism
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