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Some parents believe that children need strict rules. Other parents believe children should have a lot of freedom to make decisions on their own. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

#parents #children #rules #freedom #decisions
Parents play an important role
on
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in
development
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the development
 of their children. Some parents believe children need strict
rules whereas
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rules, whereas
 others believe the need for
freedom
 to make decisions. These beliefs play critical role
on
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in
 the development of children. Children nowadays, tend to have more
freedom
 than their predecessors, and
this
 has led to
more premature sexual conception
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the more premature sexual conception
, drugs and alcohol abuses, smoking and other variety of problems. Due to the significant increase in these problems, I believe that parents should have stricter rules. These problems
has negatively affected
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have negatively affected
 our society and is increasing day by day due to more
freedom
 to make choices. A recently published article by
World Bank which
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the World Bank, which
the World Bank which
 had specifically researched on
this
 topic found that, the percentage of children associated
in
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with
 any one kind of abuse among alcohol, drugs, smoking, sex
was
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were
 70% higher compared to the stats of same survey conducted in 2010.
This
 represents a growing problem and needs to be tackled.
Also
, the local rehabilitation
center
an area that is approximately central within some larger region
centre
, here in
kathmandu
the capital and largest city of Nepal
Kathmandu
 has seen
unprecedented number
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an unprecedented number
unprecedented numbers
 of teenage children in recent years.
Therefore
, to curb these problems, parents should implement stricter rules on their children. It is
also
 important
to
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for
 children to learn to make decisions and to understand
freedom
. Being able to express their desire, creativity and art would lead to
development
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the development
 of children.
This
 in turn would lead to children beings able to make decision more wisely based on their own personal experiences.
However
, considering both the positive and negative aspects of
freedom
 of choices and stricter rules, it appears that to tackle current problems faced by society due to
unmanaged
 children, stricter rules should be implemented by parents.

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