Increasing the price of petrol is the best way to solve growing ttaffic and pollution problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

The education issues are always concerned
by
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with
people. People said that the
way
of learning can not only determine one’s grades in
school
but his future. There are two main ways of studying -- studying alone or in groups. When I was in middle
school
, my teacher let students study
alone so
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alone, so
that the order of the class would keep
good
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well
. When I was in high
school
, the
school
leaders encouraged students to change a new
way
to learn and
then
the students began studying in groups. Studying alone can train students to think independently. Students are
also
able to make their own plan and adjust their studying timetable based on
themselves
of them or themselves
their
so studying alone is flexible for students.
However
, some problems in the course of learning will be difficult to find.
Thus
, students will go to a wrong
way
in studying so that their efficiency of studying will decrease. Studying
lonely maybe
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lonely, maybe
more suitable for the students who have strong possessiveness,
clear aim
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clear aims
and reasonable studying plans. Studying in
group
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groups
can inspire the enthusiasm of students since each student is involved in studying. Students can
also
expand thinking because one question may have several solutions by studying in
group
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groups
a group
. In the
group
, communications among the
group
members are increasing, and
that is
helpful with improving friendship and building team spirit. In
group
studying, students can supervise each other so that the protracted students will not lag behind. But there are still some problems with studying in
group
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groups
a group
.
Firstly
, the difference of academic level of
group
members is existed.
Secondly
,
group
members may have
divergence
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diverged
divergent
in studying. So studying in
group
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a group
the group
is appropriate for the students who are happy to hear different voices and have the courage of their own opinions.
In addition
, they usually get along with their classmates. Even though studying alone offers an opportunity which
let
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lets
students make their own studying plans,
this
way
is only
worked
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working
for the students who can control themselves and follow their plans step by step. Both studying alone and studying in
group
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the group
a group
groups
have shortcomings, but in my opinion, studying in groups is more conductive to self-improvement. During
group
studying, students can learn from other students’ and they may correct their shortcoming in studying.
Additionally
, studying in
group
is not only helpful with students’ studies, but can improve their capacity in communicating, which will benefit students who eventually will leave their
school
for working.
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