University should accept equal number of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree and disagree?

Nowadays, studying in
university
increasingly popular which have many subjects
for
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to
their students. Same
number
of male and female
student
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students
need to be accepted by
university
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the university
universities
a university
.
This
essay will discuss why accepting students based on their interest
is
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are
entirely necessary, despite any
gender
.
University
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The university
should give
same
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the same number
number
of
admission
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admissions
to
boy
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boys
a boy
the boy
and girl in every
subject
. Female and male have
same
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the same opportunity
opportunity
to
growth
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grow
in their life so equal
number
of students show the equality of society.
For example
, in the past, some
university
gave chance to female students and they are now working as a scientist as like as
male
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a male
. Female in society might be contribute as male if universities are going to give
opportunity
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an opportunity
in
subject
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the subject
.
In contrast
,
number
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the number
a number
of
university
student
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students
should not be same by
gender
in every
subject
. Admission process of
university
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a university
depend
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depends
upon talented students not any particular
gender
. Male and female students have not same interest in
subject
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the subject
a subject
.
For example
, some talented male students
not get
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don't get
aren't getting
chance
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a chance
to study any particular courses because of seat reserved for female
student
. Admission process based on talent so that it might be not affect talented
student
. In conclusion, students have more
opportunity
to study in
university
compared to
past
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the past
.
This
essay
will discussed
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will discuss
why universities give
same
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the same opportunity
opportunity
to male and female students in every
subject
. In my opinion, talented students will get
chance
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a chance
the chance
to study in universities rather depend upon any particular
gender
.

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