Discipline is an ever increasing problem in modern schools. Some people think that discipline should be the responsibility of teachers, while others think that this is the role of parents. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Good
Discipline
is one of the key attribute of
person's character
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a person's character
the person's character
. There is
difference
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a difference
in opinion on whose
responisibility
the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force
responsibility
responsibilities
is to guide the students through
right
behaviour
, as few people think it's a duty of the Teachers at
school
,
where as
on the other hand
whereas
others consider that, bringing ideal
discipline
in their children is totally dependant on the Parents. I definitely believe that, both Parents and teachers will play a vital role in order to nurture good
discipline
in children
Now a days
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Nowadays
,
majority
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the majority
of the schools have realized the importance of
discipline
and coming up with
distinct intiatives
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a distinct initiative
distinct initiative
distinct initiatives
the distinct initiative
to improvise
right
behaviour
in students. Teachers at
school
,
instead
of just focusing on studies, should keep a track of each of the
students
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student
student's
students'
discipline
and keep the parents apprised of their children's conduct in regular intervals. For an instance, several schools hold a quarterly conference with
paretnts
a father or mother; one who begets or one who gives birth to or nurtures and raises a child; a relative who plays the role of guardian
parents
in which, Teachers are now discussing children's conduct along with their progress on education. They are providing some materials
to
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for
parents to
councel
a lawyer who pleads cases in court
counsel
cancel
their children and
lead them to
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lead them right to
right
discipline
. I strongly recommend that, modern schools should mandate some programs to teach ethics at
school
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the school
On the other hand
, Parents should
also
spend some quality time on optimizing their
child
's
behaviour
. Parents usually show indefinite love towards children and in that process, they will snub the mistakes done by their children. Parents should always prompt the children, if the children are doing wrong and correct them instantly. I came across
an
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a
situation with my friend's kid, where the
child
was always possessive about the toys and reluctant to share with friends. My friend upon observing
this
behaviour
in his
child
, Incessantly
reminded
recall knowledge from memory; have a recollection
remembered
the kid that "sharing is caring", which worked quite well. While teachers doing their job at
school
, it's
also
imperative that parents should focus on
child
's conduct at home, to accomplish good
discipline
in their children Good
discipline
from childhood will definitely help with
right attitude
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the right attitude
after growing up. In my opinion, only after teachers providing assistance at
school
and parents guiding their children at home, elegant
discipline
will nurture in the children

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