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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

#internet #access #information #minutes
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These days, it i
s be
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is
noticeable that the
internet
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 is playing a major role in human life. The widespread
information
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 which a
re present on our devices often turn
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is present on our devices often turning
often present on our devices turns
has present on our devices often turned
is present on our devices often turned
are present on our devices often turn
out to be useful.
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, it is contentious that whether
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 is good for us or not. In my view, I believe that having access to
information
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 is g
ood but
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good, but
there are some drawbacks to it as well. In
this
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 essay, I am going to look at both sides and present my view on it. To start with, let us focus on what benefits we have through
internet
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information
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.
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, it saves h
uge amount
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a huge amount
of time when it comes to sorting out things.
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, if someone wants to go for a dinner or a movie, the
internet
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 becomes handy in
such
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 cases by sharing navigation and finding p
erfect place
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the perfect place
a perfect place
to go. Another good aspect of having
information
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 is that many students can have open resources to look o
n.
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at
for
 To illustrate, a student who wants to learn more about physics, he/she do not have to wait for the
next
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 class or module. They can have their studies on
internet
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 platform as well.
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 gives a huge boost to their knowledge and preparation.
Nevertheless
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, there is a negative side to it as well. Many times it has been seen that there is misuse of the
information
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.
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, on social media often users c
ompaint
an often persistent bodily disorder or disease; a cause for complaining
complaint
complained
about the protection of their data,
also
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 misinformation can be spread through
such
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 platforms which can affect peace in the s
oceity.
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
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herfore,
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Therefore
 it is important to have some restrictions to the amount of
information
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 a person can get. To conclude, having access to things which are p
roductive
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produced
for us is quite useful.
However
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, there should be some restrains over the
information
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 so that it can be secure for everyone.

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    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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