Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Teenage and adulthood are

parts

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part

life

. Both have

different scenario

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a different scenario

like ideology, circumstances, perspectives, worries etc. Youth

have developed

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has developed

the aims at growing ages and adults were at the age where they accomplished or trying to

accomplished

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accomplish

the goals. Younger

have

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has

chances to change their

life

careers at some extended. They were

free to roaming

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free roaming

around the world and get

experience

form

a giver or sender

from

their

practically

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practical

world.

Youth social circle

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The youth social circle

is strong they are more socially involves in the world causes, parties, trips and any type of campaigns. They have more time to study, make mistakes and let them correct by which they get

experience

. They had no worries at young or teenage

life

. Adulthood is a

phase

were

In or at or to what place

where

we afraid to get chances.

This

stage we have a successful career, goals were achieved or going to be accomplished soon. Adult’s

phase

people have practical

experience

for their mistakes which they made in

past

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the past

or they get

experience

that if we do that

this

will end like

this

or that. If one adult married so he/she have more responsibilities to look after the family. He/she

have

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has

to earn the quite reasonable amount to

full

make full, also in a metaphorical sense

fill

their family needs. They have emotional support from their

family which

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family, which

make them to do the impossible one’s. In my

opinion both

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opinion, both

phase

people have

happiness according

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happiness, according

phases but

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phases, but

if we talk about the circle of

life teenage

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life, teenage

have no worries at the time rather adults were in the

phase

life

were, they had their family and know how to tackle the critical situation. So, adults have happy

life

instead

of teenage.

Sun Dec 22 2019

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3Word repetition
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18Grammar mistakes
 

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266 words

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Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Formative years
Autonomy
Fulfillment
Wisdom
Significant choices
Exploration
Financial responsibilities
Deeper relationships
Personal growth
Accomplishments
Character development
Life milestones
Adulthood
Adolescence
Carefree nature
Achievements
Life satisfaction
Stress-free
Independence
Responsibilities

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