Some people think that the teenage years are the happiest times of most people’s lives. Others think that adult life brings more happiness, in spite of greater responsibilities. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

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Teenage and adulthood are
parts
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part
of
life
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. Both have
different scenario
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a different scenario
like ideology, circumstances, perspectives, worries etc. Youth
have developed
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has developed
the aims at growing ages and adults were at the age where they accomplished or trying to
accomplished
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accomplish
the goals. Younger
have
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has
chances to change their
life
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careers at some extended. They were
free to roaming
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free roaming
around the world and get
experience
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form
a giver or sender
from
their
practically
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practical
world.
Youth social circle
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The youth social circle
is strong they are more socially involves in the world causes, parties, trips and any type of campaigns. They have more time to study, make mistakes and let them correct by which they get
experience
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. They had no worries at young or teenage
life
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. Adulthood is a
phase
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were
In or at or to what place
where
we afraid to get chances.
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stage we have a successful career, goals were achieved or going to be accomplished soon. Adult’s
phase
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people have practical
experience
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for their mistakes which they made in
past
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the past
or they get
experience
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that if we do that
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will end like
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or that. If one adult married so he/she have more responsibilities to look after the family. He/she
have
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has
to earn the quite reasonable amount to
full
make full, also in a metaphorical sense
fill
their family needs. They have emotional support from their
family which
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family, which
make them to do the impossible one’s. In my
opinion both
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opinion, both
phase
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people have
happiness according
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happiness, according
phases but
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phases, but
if we talk about the circle of
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life teenage
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life, teenage
have no worries at the time rather adults were in the
phase
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of
life
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were, they had their family and know how to tackle the critical situation. So, adults have happy
life
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instead
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of teenage.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Formative years
  • Autonomy
  • Fulfillment
  • Wisdom
  • Significant choices
  • Exploration
  • Financial responsibilities
  • Deeper relationships
  • Personal growth
  • Accomplishments
  • Character development
  • Life milestones
  • Adulthood
  • Adolescence
  • Carefree nature
  • Achievements
  • Life satisfaction
  • Stress-free
  • Independence
  • Responsibilities
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