Some people argue that arts, such as paintings and music, are a waste of money and the government should spend this money on other public services. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Many adults believe that arts are essentials

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in

our life, others argue that arts,

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as

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and painting, are a waste of

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, and

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authorities should allocate

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money

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on public services. I hold the view that

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social thinking is a positive development because of the lack of public services in the

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and education services. To start with, some people and I are of the belief that spending

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on

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the arts

are a waste of

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, arts and

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should be funded by private companies because it may be considered as a profit organization, and

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to contribute positively in the

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authorities could encourage individuals to participate in both

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art

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. According to a survey conducted by The Times news, almost 60% of overall arts and

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media provided by private organizations which are made by private business. It may be assumed that spending

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sector of the

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is a waste of

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to

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,

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should spend

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on public services. To illustrate more, public services,

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as

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and education, these things determine the quality of life that most of us have.

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, in the developing countries, the

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should allocate more resources on

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to improve the

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system. If the

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does not spend enough

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on hospitals, the

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of our

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may decline;

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at the end is responsible to provide

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better health services

a better health service

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service for all members of the

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.

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,

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must spend a large part of its budget on public services rather than arts or

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. To conclude,

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there is an argue

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about

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either on arts and

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or on public services, it depends on the progress of the nation. In my opinion, in developing countries, authorities should spend a large part of its budget on public services to rather that spending on arts and

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