In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children single sex schools or educational schools,some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages

In several nations
,
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,
parents of
think
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thinking
thought
that select to
enroled
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enrol
enrolled
enrolling
their children educational schools.
others
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Others
think that single sex school have
lot
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lots
of
problmes
a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved
problems
after in the life.
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
completely disagree of
eassy
posing no difficulty; requiring little effort
easy
views about two
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
genders
beacuse
for the reason that; on account of
because
of, if two
oppositve
being directly across from each other; facing
opposite
genders compete
to
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with
each other its best way to both boys and girls
beacause
for the reason that; on account of
because
they have
differnt mind aproach
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a different mind approach
different mind aproach
different mind approach
differnt mind approach
and
strenght
the property of being physically or mentally strong
strength
so they easily tackle
issue
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the issue
relative their own lives in
forceeable
capable of being anticipated
foreseeable
future.About
somebyear
lacking brightness or color; dull
sombre
ago one
indain
a member of the race of people living in America when Europeans arrived
Indian
ending
university did research on
differnt
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
co_education schools and colleges after
finished
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finishing
the research they got
final result
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the final result
that co-education play a vital role in both genders they make easy
commincation
the activity of communicating; the activity of conveying information
communication
communications
and grow their mind
thinkg
judge or regard; look upon; judge
think
power through
deferent
unlike in nature or quality or form or degree
different
kind of games and
competetions
a business relation in which two parties compete to gain customers
competitions
competition
and
specially
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
girls and made
confidemce
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
whenever they play opposite gender and beat them.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
national and international games girls easily
compitive
involving competition or competitiveness
competitive
and
acheive
to gain with effort
achieve
the
succes
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
...
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
think its best approach for girls and boys to
enroled
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enrol
enrolled
enrolling
in co-education schools. In Conclusion
,
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,
despite
think
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thinks
about
disadvanteges
the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position
disadvantages
its duty to parents and society to
admitted
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admit
their
chlidrens
a very large pot that is used for boiling
cauldrons
in co-
educatinal
relating to the process of education
educational
sector institutes.

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