In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children single sex schools or educational schools,some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages

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parents of

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thinking

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that select to

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enrol

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their children educational schools.

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a state of difficulty that needs to be resolved

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refers to the speaker or writer

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the issue

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the final result

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the quality of having an inferior or less favorable position

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Mon Dec 23 2019

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Supported main points

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Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

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Accurate spelling & word formation

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Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

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179 words

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In many countries today,parents are able to choose to send their children single sex schools or educational schools,some people think that children going to single sex schools have disadvantages

Fully explain your ideas

Some people regard eating meat as completely wrong. To what extent do you agree?

Many foods are shipped from far away. Some people think that eating local food is more environmentally and economically. Do you think the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?

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The advantages of the spread of English as a global language will continue to outweigh its disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

When we meet someone for the first time, we generally decide very quickly what kind of person we think they are and if we like them or not. Is this a good thing or a bad thing?