Some people think that using mobile phone and computers has a negative effect on young people 's reading and writing skills .to what extended do you agree or disagree?

In
this
technological era everyone fond to
use
technology devices
such
as, mobile phones and computers. Many human beings believe that
this
gadget may hamper your skills,
for instance
, reading and writing.
However it
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However, it
has pros as well as cons. I partially agree with
this
statement and I will discuss both perspectives in following paragraphs. There is no denying in the fact that people tend to
use
more facilities from technology. There are
myraid
too numerous to be counted
myriad
factors behind using technologies
such
as cell phones and computer.
First
and foremost factor for reading and writing from computer or their own mobile device is it is
most convenient way
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the most convenient way
to
use
and utilize.
Consequently
, these devices are
became
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becoming
more popular nowadays due their features and softwares.
As a result
student
get
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gets
all the information from that technological devices and there is no necessity to go through traditional books and turn pages.
Secondly
, reading from
cell phone
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cell phones
a cell phone
may ease your life by providing facility at home or while
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
and utilize that time.
For instance
, anyone can read from their phones during
long distance journey
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a long distance journey
.
Besides
this
, using computers for educational may explore worldwide education by providing online feedback. To exemplify, students
use
to learn from foreign education resources. On the paradoxical side
,
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,
it can said that gaining knowledge from
Internet
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the Internet
or artificial intelligence can be hazardous. There are plethora demerits of using
this
facility.
Firstly
, if they
use
this devices
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these devices
this device
in their
study
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study, then they
then
they may end up with losing fundamental skills of
study
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students
. To illustrate, they will not able to
fulfill
put in effect
fulfil
skill of handwriting.
Furthermore
, due to overuse of
this
facilities
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facility
there may chances to cause of many health issues.
Such
as, obesity, eyesight weaknesses and many more.
Nevertheless
, pupils
can not
can not
cannot
improve and strengthen the skill of cognitive because lack
use
of handwriting and reading from traditional books. In conclusion, I reiterate that there are merits as well drawbacks.
However
, these devices can be beneficial for them if students
use
them properly with time limit.

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