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Some people say learners should start their debating and presentation skills in their early age rather than in their higher institutes. To what extent you agree?

There is no denying the fact that debating and presentation
skills
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 are important.
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 it is a commonly held belief that learning these
skills
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 at their early age will be useful, there is
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 an argument that opposes it. In my opinion, I consider that insignificant. There are many topics that need to be understood first.
To begin
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 with, mathematics
skills
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.
In other words
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, it is crucial for students to know how they solve the questions by using math laws.
In addition
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, how can they be special with other subjects?
For example
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, when the teacher explains, they will get many ways to answer
and
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, and
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 that will help them to be creative in their surrounding environment , not just in mathematics, but
also
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 in other relevant topics. Another point to consider is the writing
skills
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. It is
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 possible to say that it is vital to learn at in young age , which is helpful to achieve high scores during early school years.
Moreover
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 hand handwriting is very important; it is
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 better to get that from the beginning.
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, it is hard for people to boost or enhance their
skills
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 after being fifteen years old , rather than when they took that during their youth , there is time to boost themselves. It is really hard for their life when they can not write very well because they were studying debating and presentation
instead
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 of the significant things of that age. In conclusion, despite people having different views, I believe that better to promote other
skills
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 in the first five or six years.

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Task Response
Your main idea should be clearer. It’s important to directly answer the question. Try to state your opinion early in the essay.
Coherence and Cohesion
Make sure your paragraphs have a clear main idea. Use linking words to connect your points better.
Task Response
Provide more examples to support your points. This will help make your argument stronger and clearer.
Content
You have identified important skills that students need to learn.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • debate
  • presentation
  • skill
  • communicate
  • confidence
  • child
  • develop
  • earlier
  • teach
  • learn
  • important
  • future
  • career
  • school
  • critical
  • thinking
  • social
  • respect
  • teamwork
  • viewpoint
  • express
  • idea
  • clear
  • foundation
  • information
  • area
  • challenge
  • persuasion
  • early
  • exposure
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