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Because of modern technology, it is no longer necessary for people to learn handwriting skill, but others believe that handwriting is still an important skill. Discuss both and give your opinion.

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In today's society, as technology has become increasingly prevalent, many believe that it is unnecessary to study traditional writing. In my opinion, I consider that handwriting ought not to be learnt, as electronic devices provide a new writing experience and can tremendously reduce tedious work. On the one hand, computers generally have built-in software that allows its users to type correctly faster than traditional writing, and I agree.
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 device contains advanced programs that are able to correct any incorrect sentences and search for new synonyms instantly. Due to
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, people are able to learn grammar, spelling and new vocabularies quicker than through handwriting.
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, these technologies provide digital or physical keyboards in order to help the users type their ideas faster.
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eir childhood, where people write traditional characters with brushes and tints, which has been proven to help the Japanese pupils to reach the highest score during their examination. In conclusion,
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 of studying the handwriting skill.

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