discuss the advantage and disadvange of living in the city?

For a long time,
this
has been a question for human beings that if living in the
city
is blessing or a curse. Well, it has both advantages as well as disadvantages. To get the
perfact
being complete of its kind and without defect or blemish
perfect
view of the situation
this
topic is
dicussed
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discussed
below.
City
Suggestion
The city
is the junction of good infrastructure, basic
ammenities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
, educational institutions, hospitals
etc.
Suggestion
Etc.
City
Suggestion
The city
is the perfect place to earn better amount of money and
also
to spend.
City
Suggestion
The city
provides services at any
time anywhere
Accept comma addition
time, anywhere
with the
incresing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
help of technology. There are benefits of living in cities which cannot be fulfilled by living in
suburbs
Suggestion
the suburbs
. Most of the multinational companies and
oraganisations
a group of people who work together
organizations
organisations
organization
are
situeted
situated in a particular spot or position
situated
in the cities which gives employment, social services to an average
person
to make his/her life style more
effcient
being effective without wasting time or effort or expense
efficient
. For the
prgress
gradual improvement or growth or development
progress
of a
person it
Accept comma addition
person, it
is necessary to live in the cities as
city
provied
give something useful or necessary to
provide
provides
provided
you all the important elements to become a
successfull
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
person
.
On the contrary
not living in the
city
has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
disadvantages too. As living in the
city
has these advantages, people often choose
city
to live. So there's a rush of people for living
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
the
city
. Which sadly
increses
become bigger or greater in amount
increases
increase
the prices of
accomadations
making or becoming suitable; adjusting to circumstances
accommodations
accommodation
as well as other
ammenities
things that make you comfortable and at ease
amenities
ailments
whoch
interrogative pronoun, used both substantively and adjectivally, and in direct and indirect questions, to ask for, or refer to, an individual person or thing among several of a class
which
cannot be
afford
Suggestion
afforded
by an average
person
.
This
rush
also
pollutes the region
veru
used as an intensifier
very
where
vary
highly with the traffic, the pollutants from the factories and vehicles. The crime rate is higher and people have to suffer from it. These points show that living in the
city
has
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
advantages as well as disadvantages which cannot be ignored and should be considered as a serious factor. From the given explanations of the topic we can say it is a better
approch
move towards
approach
approaches
to live in the
city
to grow one's self and to give
better future
Suggestion
a better future
to your
kids but
Accept comma addition
kids, but
there is
also
a beautiful, clean,
lovable
Suggestion
loving
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
affable environment outside the
city
which grows your
Suggestion
which grows with your
innerself
Suggestion
inner self
.

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