Some people think that there are now too many cars on the roads and that they are spoiling our towns and cities ? Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's scenario, the significance of car is irrefutable
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Even though most of people
have used
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use
their private vehicles on the road for daily purpose which create a lot of
traffic
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congestion and
pollution
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. Ramification, I totally agree with notion that use of cars have been steadily increased
for
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since
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government should make some rules and regulations. The. Aspects I am going to Focus on
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being
road design, safety and
pollution
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To begin
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with, all around the world main issues is
traffic
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congestion and
pollution
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Moreover
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when individuals have been started use of private vehicle
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as cars or
morst
used to form the superlative
most
bikes in
the narrowest
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the narrow
cities.
For example
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, in India it
have been estimated
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has been estimated
that 80% people live in
urban area
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an urban area
urban areas
and they commute to their workplace by their
automobiles which
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automobiles, which
cause negative impacts on their lifestyles
such
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as
pollution
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and
traffic
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Consequently
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, people must be used the public transportations to reduce the
traffic
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problem in the country. On the other side
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the immense of private vehicles have been utilized and number of accidents
are occurred
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are occurring
have occurred
in each part of the country.
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, the government should retain some rules and regulations which must be followed by the youth
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As a result
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accidents
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accident
case will be determined and people feel safe
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in India it proved that a lot of accidents are
occurred
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occurring
every month and people lose their life. For
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government must organise the car limit speed
siginal
any nonverbal action or gesture that encodes a message
signal
signals
in every stop
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, people can be awarded about the stand-in order.
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, air
pollution
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is one the
harzardous
involving risk or danger
hazardous
hazards
impacts
on
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of
having too
much
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many
cars in towns and cities.
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, it probably car
produce
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produces
poisiouns
having the qualities or effects of a poison
poisonous
poisons
pollution
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gas
such
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as carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the
people
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person's
peoples
health and they have respiratory diseases
such
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as asthma and lung cancer
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As a result
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a cities and town people must look after
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this issues
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this issue
these issues
and make permanent solutions for
this
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such
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grow more plants and must utilize the better quality oil for their private vehicles. In conclusion,
Although
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most of people
live
go away from a place
leave
their cars because it is
sight
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a sight
the sight
of our dependence, should make
fewer
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little
use of it and give preference to public transport.
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Besides it
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Besides, it
make
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makes
our
enivornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
friendly and less
traffic
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on the road
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