Some people think that there are now too many cars on the roads and that they are spoiling our towns and cities ? Do you agree or disagree?

In today's scenario, the significance of car is irrefutable
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Even though most of people
have used
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use
their private vehicles on the road for daily purpose which create a lot of
traffic
congestion and
pollution
. Ramification, I totally agree with notion that use of cars have been steadily increased
for
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since
this
government should make some rules and regulations. The. Aspects I am going to Focus on
are
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being
road design, safety and
pollution
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To begin
with, all around the world main issues is
traffic
congestion and
pollution
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Moreover
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when individuals have been started use of private vehicle
such
as cars or
morst
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most
bikes in
the narrowest
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the narrow
cities.
For example
, in India it
have been estimated
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has been estimated
that 80% people live in
urban area
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an urban area
urban areas
and they commute to their workplace by their
automobiles which
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automobiles, which
cause negative impacts on their lifestyles
such
as
pollution
and
traffic
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Consequently
, people must be used the public transportations to reduce the
traffic
problem in the country. On the other side
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the immense of private vehicles have been utilized and number of accidents
are occurred
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are occurring
have occurred
in each part of the country.
Hence
, the government should retain some rules and regulations which must be followed by the youth
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As a result
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,
accidents
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accident
case will be determined and people feel safe
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For example
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in India it proved that a lot of accidents are
occurred
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occurring
every month and people lose their life. For
this
government must organise the car limit speed
siginal
any nonverbal action or gesture that encodes a message
signal
signals
in every stop
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Consequently
, people can be awarded about the stand-in order.
In addition
, air
pollution
is one the
harzardous
involving risk or danger
hazardous
hazards
impacts
on
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of
having too
much
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many
cars in towns and cities.
Furthermore
, it probably car
produce
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produces
poisiouns
having the qualities or effects of a poison
poisonous
poisons
pollution
gas
such
as carbon
dioxide which
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dioxide, which
effects
have an effect upon
affects
the
people
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person's
peoples
health and they have respiratory diseases
such
as asthma and lung cancer
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As a result
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a cities and town people must look after
this issues
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this issue
these issues
and make permanent solutions for
this
such
grow more plants and must utilize the better quality oil for their private vehicles. In conclusion,
Although
most of people
live
go away from a place
leave
their cars because it is
sight
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a sight
the sight
of our dependence, should make
fewer
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little
use of it and give preference to public transport.
Besides it
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Besides, it
make
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makes
our
enivornment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
friendly and less
traffic
on the road
.
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