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Demand of food is increasing worlwide. What are the causes of this? What measures can the international community take to make sure the food supply is enough?

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Food
 is essential for the survival of human beings as well as animals, birds and all living organisms. In recent years, the
demand
 for
food
 is increasing worldwide. With regards to increasing
demand
 for
food
, in
this
 writing we will discuss the possible causes for
this
increase
 and possible solutions to address
this
demand
. One of the causes for the surge in
demand
 for
food
 is the growing human
population
.
Human
Suggestion
The human population
population
 has reached
unprecedented number
Suggestion
an unprecedented number
unprecedented numbers
 in the current years. Currently, the global human
population
 is about 8 billion.
Therefore
, for the survival of human
population
,
demand
 for
food
 has grown.
In addition
 to the
population
 growth of humans,
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
 factor that has contributed to the
demand
 for
food
 is lack of household
agriculture
 practices. People from older generation used to have kitchen garden or small farms near home to produce crops and
food
. Now, with the ever-busy city life, people have left
such
 farm practices which
has led
Suggestion
have led
 to increased dependency on
other
plural of other; the people or things not already mentioned
others
 for
food
,
thus
 increasing the
demand
 for
food
. To address the growing
demand
 for
food
,
international community
Suggestion
the international community
 could employ better
agriculture
 and farm practices to
increase
 the production of
agriculture
 and foods.
This
 would directly lead to
increase
 in
food
.
Further
, improvement in
agriculture
 processing is needed to
increase
 the production of
food
 from raw
agriculture
 products. Another possible solution could be changing people’s habit of
food
 consumption. As,
recently
Suggestion
recent
 World Bank report on
food
 states that almost 35% of human
population
 are obese, whereas 20% of
global
Suggestion
the global population
population
 have malnutrition.
Therefore
, people should be encouraged to have
right amount
Suggestion
the right amount
 of
food
. These possible solutions could help address the growing
demand
food
 worldwide.

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