It is important to teach children to protect the environment as it is to teach them to read and write . To what extent do you agree with this statement ? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experiences .

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Teaching
children to
precevie
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
the
inviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
is valid and beneficial issue. As educate them to write and read. In
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an analytic or interpretive literary composition
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I will explain the important value of
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these concepts
this concept
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First
the responsibility of learning children to
prectect
shield from danger, injury, destruction, or damage
protect
our
inviroment
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
depend on both family and community.
First
Imagine the world if all families feel responsible to teach their sibling who to clean the beaches or garden
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public outdoor, not misuse any government facilities It will help because
this young
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this, young
these young
children in the future will be adult and if their
behavior
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
is addressed that mean stunning and helpful future
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of
our countries.
Second
families should be
good example
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a good example
good examples
to their kids like
parent
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a parent
can be participated in one society or group whose caring to keep our
environment
is healthy and clean and share their children in
this
group
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In
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any of various alternatives; some other
another
view the
school
should give lessons about keeping
environment
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the environment
clean and the benefit of
this
value should
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subsequently or soon afterward (often used as sentence connectors)
then
the hazards and disadvantages of bad
environment
, the teacher can encourage student to plant.
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And
give
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practical lessons
a practical lesson
about that.
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is
important to healthy
environment
also
school
can do championships about how to keep our
environment
is clean I think children like seeds if you caring them at the present day
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Tomorrow
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they will be strong skeleton of our community
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I remember when I was in primary
school
how my teacher teach us
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on the topic of
about
the value of gardening and
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the effect
that ton our
environment
at that day all student was starting to plant roses and seeds
infront
our
school
and at the end of
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the month
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Our
school
become
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has become
becomes
is becoming
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a fascinating and wonderful view
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We feel that we make amazing pictures
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of
our
environment
and gave message that even
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a small thing
can help to keep
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the environment
clean and safe
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Inclusion I feel we need both government and.
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Family
to cooperative to learn children about important
environment
and I am sure I we will get
fantasist
results.
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