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As countries develop, people tend to buy more and more cars. Do you thing the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?

#countries #people #cars #environment
In
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On
 modern country people lead to have more cars. In
this
assay
an analytic or interpretive literary composition
essay
 I will explain the advantages of
this
 issue to individual and disadvantages for our environment.
First
, if people have own
car
,
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,
 that's mean any time the transportation will be available and comfortable
.
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.
 So the employment will reach their jobs
on
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at
 the time and student will not be late at the school. No excuse of why I am late
.
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.
Any place you can go without limitation and you will stop your
car
 near the place you want but if you use public traffic. You spend more period and it will stop many
time
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times
 till you reach the area you want
,
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,
may be
by chance
maybe
 you will stand if all chairs are occupied in buses or train
.
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.
at
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At
 the end
,
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,
 the park station will be not exactly near your aim. There are Alister of negative point of having your
car
.
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.
 It will be
have
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having
 more traffic congestion and air pollution and
noisy
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noise
 atmosphere
,
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,
also
 the traffic accident will be
increase
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an increase
with
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in
car
 crowding
.
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.
If We use bike or public transport it can help to reduce carbon dioxide or any
hazards
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hazard
 gases that it is result of cars. We need to keep our culture and field are safe and
air
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the air
 is clean and natural environment. In conclusion
,
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,
 in spite of benefit of own
car
 transport, there
are
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is
 a lot of important disadvantages view of that in our
environmen
the totality of surrounding conditions
environment
, that
should be keep
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should keep
should be kept
 in our mind before
decide
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deciding
 to buy any vehicle. To
precive
keep or maintain in unaltered condition; cause to remain or last
preserve
environment
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the environment
 and keep clean and naturals day
that is
 our responsibility.
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