Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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television, they

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very less interest in the reading books. As we can see reading books is one of most knowledgeable way for a

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children

to improve

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fluency of

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the utterance of intelligible speech

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reading, but

very less children's are following these days these

generation

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generations

want everything digital reading and writing. By watching

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playing video games is not a right method to gain the knowledge for children. Overall

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reading books

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very safe side in

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there are

less effects

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less effective

less effect

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the thing named or in question

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playing video games

Tue Dec 24 2019

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Some people think reading stories in books is better than watching TV or playing computer games for children. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Fully explain your ideas

The two plans show Pancha village in 2005 and 2015. Write a summary of the information. Select and report the main features, and make comparisons when necessary.

People are staying more and more at home, these days. What are the causes and effects.

As computers are being used more and more in education, there will be soon no role for teachers in the classroom. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

The bar chart details average daily sales by total number of servings at a restaurant according to season.

Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this. What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to save the environment?