In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university studies. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages for young people who decide to do this.

Now a days students are given motivation to perform in actual market before picking up a specific course or stream for their higher studies. I completely believe that
this
is a fair chance given to the freshman to
analyize
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
and judge one's self and
also
know the real scenario of the businesses. I shall
further
discuss about the pros and
cond
an argument opposed to a proposal
cons
count
on the same.
To begin
with
,
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the main advantage of giving a year to school going kids before jumping into their universities would be for them getting a projection to how things jobs are performed.
That
is it
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is, it
gives them an idea of the corporate world
,
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,
exposing themselves to the fact of life with challenges to be faced in workplace. Making
this
decision would ultimately help in
longer run
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the longer run
. Another advantage of an annual gap
is student
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is, a student
is a student
can try up different fields and choose the best of his
interest
.
This
would enable the schooling kid to know his/her hobbies, subject of
interest
, place of choice and many other things.
For Example
a juvenile may have his favourite subject as
accounts but
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accounts, but
may have a hobby of photography and
this
time
gap shall allow him to better identify his talent over both.
However
, when there are benefits; drawbacks
has
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have
to be there. The Major drawback of a year being provided to schoolings is they may lose
interest
in
further
studies. 12 months has 365 and each day these youngsters have a new idea, a new love, a new lesson, a new friend and a new companion. While many may use
this
time
efficiently and for one's betterment others may not do so ultimately resulting
into
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in
loss of
interest
in studies.
This
would
further
lead to
destruction
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the destruction
of the family as whole.
For example
, in a country like India where there are n number of remote villages if
this
is done many homes may get destroyed due to
distraction
the termination of something by causing so much damage to it that it cannot be repaired or no longer exists
destruction
of young ones in the family.
Moreover
, another major disadvantage is losing precious
time
of life. By
this
I mean, young generation may not be able to decide or may choose more
time
to think over best possible area to study, which would apparently result in lose of
time
.
Also
taking
break
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breaks
for a year would lead their juniors and their seniors at
exactly
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exact
same state which would give a bad impact on the pupil in lower class. To Conclude, I think that
inspite
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in spite
of having disadvantages of the fact gaping
time
for service or exploration, advantages over powers the matter.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cultural immersion
  • Life experience
  • Work ethic
  • Career readiness
  • Self-discovery
  • Delayed gratification
  • Intellectual stagnation
  • Financial implications
  • Social dynamics
  • Academic trajectory
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