solar energy is becoming more and more popular as a source of household energy in many countries around the world. Why is this? What are the advantages and disadvantages of solar energy?

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It is an u
ndienable
not possible to deny
undeniable
fact that solar
energy
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has been gaining popularity from few previous y
ear.
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years
The majority of people used it for their daily works l
ike wise
in like or similar manner
likewise
cooking food
,
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,
for generating
electricity
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equipments bulbs
,
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,
tubes
,f
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,
ans and so on. It is well liked by different nations. Here i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will discuss about some causes behind u
ses
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the uses
of solar
energy
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and
also
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illustrate i
t
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
pros and cons.
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with the reasons behind it uses.Having more uses of
electricity
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in modern e
ra it
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era, it
will be totally reduced in future.
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hus by
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Thus, by
using solar
energy
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as a daily basis w
orks
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work
oneself can mitigate the chances of
electricity
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disappear in future.
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, being a cheaper way of its uses most of individuals use it
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ecause
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Because
when oneself wants to generate solar system only spend money once a time.n
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No one
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n
eed
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needs
to pay bills monthly
likewise
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other
electricity
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bills. There are various benefits of solar
energy
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first
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and foremost solar
energy
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i
s takes
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take
energy
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from sun so every person can use it.
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,
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,
it
a
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lso help
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also helps
has also helped
to mitigate the expenses of daily household.
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as charges that oneself spend on paying
e
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lectricity bill,
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electricity bills
the electricity bill
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,
PG,
a
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nd so on
.A
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part from
this
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,i
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t is environment friendly
.b
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ecause
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Because
cooking food with the help of solar
energy
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do not create any pollution
.
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.
On the contrary
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,L
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,
PG and coal are h
armfull
causing or capable of causing harm
harmful
for e
nvironment
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the environment
and
also
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cause of global warming. Despite having lots of pros there are some cons of solar
energy
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.
For instance
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,
i
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,
t only works with sun r
ays so
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rays, so
during the night and rainy season it can not be used.
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econdly in
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Secondly, in
winter it works is slower than summer when s
un
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the sun
produced more heat to e
arth
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the earth
.
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Moreover
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,
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,
every person c
an not
can not
cannot
afford it because of its high price o
n
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of
installation. At the end
,
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,
after considering all things i
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I
believed that its pros outweigh its cons. Government should well acquaint people with its uses and benefits. And
also
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encourage them towards the uses of solar
energy
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.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Renewable energy
  • Subsidies
  • Tax credits
  • Photovoltaic cells
  • Efficiency
  • Off-grid
  • Carbon footprint
  • Climate change
  • Initial investment
  • Energy security
  • Sustainability
  • Decarbonization
  • Grid parity
  • Feed-in tariff
  • Energy storage systems
  • Payback period
  • Net metering
  • Silicon panels
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