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Some people claim that traditional games had more benefits for children than modern ones. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Long-time ago, people used to play games
such
 as kite flying, hide and seek, and
dodgeball
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Dodgeball
 with their friends.
However
, after the development of the computer and
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, most children nowadays play games on their computer and phone.
Although
 some people think traditional games are more beneficial than modern games for children, there are more advantages to playing games online. Some people concern about the fact that modern games may be too harmful to children, and it may be true
for
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to
 a certain extent. Since children can access to games easily via phone and computers, they become very vulnerable to game addiction.
Also
, their eyesight and body health worsens after sitting in front of the screen for a long time and their social life decreases by staying inside their room.
However
, it is now possible for parents to control their children’s game time, and children are actually socializing with their friends by playing games online.
On the other hand
, modern games bring huge benefits to children now. After globalisation, many people decide to study abroad to learn new languages. By playing modern online games, people can still be in contact with friends that moved to another country and play together like before. They can
also
 make new friends from different countries and learn more about them while playing together.
Finally
, since there are millions of games that are made by different developers, people can play diverse games without being bored. Overall, there may be some risks of playing modern games
such
 as worsening body health and danger of game addiction.
However
, there are
also
 benefits
such
 as being able to play with friends all around the world without a distance barrier and having millions of new games to play. Since the advantages of playing modern games outweigh the disadvantages, modern games have more benefits
for
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to
 children than traditional games.

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