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ordinary people try to copy famous people either reading magazine or watching tv,why do they do this?do you think its good idea to copy famous people?

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Introduction
Television and other ways of entertainment have become highly
influencial
having or exercising influence or power
influential
 in recent times, which covers almost every age group, right from kids to aged ones. Amongst these age
groups adolescents
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groups, adolescents
 are highly affected as showing up has introduced as a status symbol in our society.
Body paragraph 1
Film Industry have been flourishing since decades and so is their impact on people.
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, admiring the talent or beauty of actors, anchors,
singers etc
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singers, etc.
singers etc.
 and copying them has a thin line
which if
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which, if
 vanished the
person
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 starts behaving like the liked ones. Following or being a fan or rather being a die hard fan is
acceptable but
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acceptable, but
 copying and imitating is not. The urge to be like the actor or actress or any other celebrity whom they admire is one of the major reasons behind a
person
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's
such
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 of action.
Body paragraph 2
On the other hand
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, many a times it happens that a
person
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 resembles to a star, which gives one an utter feeling of being same like him/her.
This
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 puts a powerful effect on the
person
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thus
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 making him/her enact the same way as his/her favourite personality is doing.
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, TikTok is now a days trending social app, through which there are numerous ordinary people who have a strong look a like of any film star
,
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,
keeps recreating the old scenes
,
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,
songs and other videos of the original
person
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.
Conclusion
To conclude, in my
opinion we
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opinion, we
 are all unique and blessed in our own way and one should not cheat
ones
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one's
 self by copying any famous personality and should rather be the best version of their selves.

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