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Many people are involved in sports when they are young but stop once they are adults why do many adults stop doing physical exercise ? what can be done about this problem ?

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Several people are physically active when they are
youthfull
suggestive of youth; vigorous and fresh
youthful
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 upon attaining
maturity but ,
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maturity, but
 they stop
endering
a movement into or inward
entering
 in sports activities. Some factors have been ascertained to cause these issues
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 at the same time
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 several counter measures have been
identify
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identified
 to deal with
these issue
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these issues
this issue
. These various reasons and their
remidies
act of correcting an error or a fault or an evil
remedies
 are
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mentioned
 in the three coming paragraphs.
discussing
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Discussing
 the reasons
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the foremost one is that the group of individuals unable to
araange
put into a proper or systematic order
arrange
 their time due to their jobs and busy schedule
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 while others may have
work
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worked
 overtime which leads them to
loss
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a loss
 in their energy
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additionally cultural
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Additionally, cultural
Additionally cultural
 changes became a massive issue
now a days
the period of time that is happening now; any continuous stretch of time including the moment of speech
nowadays
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it
it is
it's
 growing up the
lazziness
inactivity resulting from a dislike of work
laziness
 to the individuals
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Moreover
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 workers
needs
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need
 to maintain the
consistant
(sometimes followed by 'with') in agreement or consistent or reliable
consistent
constant
 responsibility
such
 as cooking
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 keeping house clean
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 taking care
od
connects a noun with the preceding word
of
 children etc.
Besides
this
 most of the education
centre
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centres
does not take
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do not take
 care of improving theirs physical
activities
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Activities
 at centre
it self
reflexive from of "it"
itself
.
However
, some productive measures could be taken to resolve the problem
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 most accurate one is people should be awaken of the advantages of healthy dieting through the broadcast
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 Which leads to improve their knowledge towards the benefits of physical fitness
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 different media houses can collaborate with government to broadcast various programmes to attract the attention of the youngsters towards the benefits of dieting. It is the responsibility of the authorities to disseminate knowledge and awareness about the positive aspects of taking up physical activities

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