Many people believe that social networking sites have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society.

With the development of technology, the

use

of social networking sites has increased dramatically throughout the

last

20 years. Keep

this

in mind, there are many people believe that the

use

of social networking sites does have a variety of detrimental i

mpact

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impacts

on both individuals and society.

However

, while I believe that social networking sites enhance and improve people’s social lives, I agree that it causes some inevitable effects on our community. With regards to individuals, the

use

of networking sites,

such

as Facebook or Twitter, d

o have

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does have

distinct advantages.

Firstly

, it allows people to connect freely and efficiently with others who share similar experiences, hobbies, and interest, without the

concern

of geographical barriers.

Additionally

, it

also

enables people who work or study abroad to communicate with their family or friends.

Consequently

, it limits the feeling of loneliness and allows people to feel proximity.

Therefore

, the

use

of networking sites is essential for people’s social lives as it enables people to communicate with each other, especially those who have the issue of geographical barriers.

On the other hand

, the

use

of social networking sites does have some detrimental impacts on our community due to its extremely addictive nature. The

concern

of people starting to become a

ddictive

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addicted

to social networking sites has increased dramatically and

this

severe

concern

i

s especially happening

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especially happens

among youths and young adults. The addictive nature often resulting in people to have less crucial face-to-face communications, and it

also

encourages people to have a sedentary lifestyle.

Consequently

, it causes fewer people to join community activities and more people are less connected with their neighbourhoods. In conclusion, social networking sites enable people to communicate with others without the

concern

of geographical barriers, and

this

is especially a

dvantages

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advantaged

to people who are working or study abroad.

However

, due to the addictive nature of networking sites, it decreases crucial face-to-face communication between people and encourages people to have a detrimental sedentary