The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart illustrates how four factors affected agricultural
land
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degradation
around the world and the table presents the Use synonyms
percentage
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land
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degradation
in three distinct regions caused by these factors during Use synonyms
1990s
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the 1990s
Overall
, as is observed from the pie chart, the main reason for Linking Words
land
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degradation
from the result of over-grazing. The ratio of over-grazing made up the biggest Use synonyms
percentage
(35%), followed by deforestation and over-cultivation, Use synonyms
stood
at 30% and 28% respectively. Correct pronoun usage
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percentages
.
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per cent
According to
the table, the highest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
land
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degradation
occurred in Europe, where the main cause was deforestation (9.8% out of 23% of Use synonyms
total
). Correct article usage
the total
However
, deforestation was the lowest Linking Words
percentage
of Use synonyms
land
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degradation
in North America where the total Use synonyms
land
degraded only made up 5%. Use synonyms
This
figure was nearly half of that in Oceania in which over-grazing accounted for the highest Linking Words
percentage
( 11.3% out of 13% of Use synonyms
total
).
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the total
While
over-cultivation did not contribute to the cause of Linking Words
land
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degradation
in Oceania, it was the highest cause in North Use synonyms
American
( 3.3%) and the Correct your spelling
America
second
factor in Europe (7.7%)Linking Words
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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