The pie chart below shows the main reasons why agricultural land becomes less productive. The table shows how these causes affected three regions of the world during the 1990s.
The pie chart illustrates how four factors affected agricultural
land
degradation
around the world and the table presents the percentage
of land
degradation
in three distinct regions caused by these factors during 1990s
Change the article
the 1990s
Overall
, as is observed from the pie chart, the main reason for land
degradation
from the result of over-grazing. The ratio of over-grazing made up the biggest percentage
(35%), followed by deforestation and over-cultivation, stood
at 30% and 28% respectively. Correct pronoun usage
which stood
Whereas
, the other factors only cover 7 percentages
.
Replace the word
per cent
According to
the table, the highest percentage
of land
degradation
occurred in Europe, where the main cause was deforestation (9.8% out of 23% of total
). Correct article usage
the total
However
, deforestation was the lowest percentage
of land
degradation
in North America where the total land
degraded only made up 5%. This
figure was nearly half of that in Oceania in which over-grazing accounted for the highest percentage
( 11.3% out of 13% of total
).
Correct article usage
the total
While
over-cultivation did not contribute to the cause of land
degradation
in Oceania, it was the highest cause in North American
( 3.3%) and the Correct your spelling
America
second
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words land, degradation, percentage with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 6 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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