Nowadays obesity is becoming a major issue in society.
Increase
in weight may lead to Correct article usage
An increase
cause
serious diseases and even death. Verb problem
apply
This
essay will discuss the reasons and some solutions, which we can use Linking Words
them
to overcome Correct pronoun usage
apply
this
issue.
In Linking Words
this
era time management Linking Words
has
the highest priority, so Verb problem
is
people
eat junk/fast food to save their precious time, and Use synonyms
this
habit will make them Linking Words
addict
to Wrong verb form
addicted
the
fast food. Some Correct article usage
apply
people
just eat them because they are fond of it. Use synonyms
This
will make them lazy for cooking, and Linking Words
this
habit will Linking Words
also
reflect on their other activities too. They become lazy to do exercise, walking, working, which will stimulate the rate of increasing weight. Linking Words
For example
, Linking Words
a
recent research conducted at the University of Alberta claims that 70% of the Remove the article
apply
people
who are not getting adequate Use synonyms
nutritions
, become lethargic in Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
their
near future.
Hopefully, we can prevent Change the word
the
this
by taking some steps against it. Linking Words
Firstly
, The government should impose higher taxes on unhealthy edible items Linking Words
such
as pizza, Linking Words
burger
, Fix the agreement mistake
burgers
ready made
Add a hyphen
ready-made
meal
, etc. Fix the agreement mistake
meals
This
may drop the sales of Linking Words
these kind
of food items significantly. Change the determiner
this kind
these kinds
Secondly
, some Linking Words
NGO
should spread awareness by conducting seminars, Fix the agreement mistake
NGOs
events
and printing banners. Correct word choice
and events
Government
should give incentives to the Correct article usage
The government
person
who Fix the agreement mistake
people
is
not having meals like these. Correct subject-verb agreement
are
For example
, in China, Linking Words
the
Correct article usage
apply
people
who Use synonyms
are
not Verb problem
do
having
unhealthy Wrong verb form
have
nutritions
and Fix the agreement mistake
nutrition
physically
fit, Add a missing verb
are physically
they
have to pay less taxes in comparison to obese persons.
Correct pronoun usage
apply
To conclude
, to stay happy and wealthy keeping Linking Words
body
in shape is essential, which can be done by regular Add an article
the body
workout
and acquiring enough and proper nourishment.Fix the agreement mistake
workouts