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Some people think that teaching methodology in the modern classroom should be based on experiential learning. While others believe that traditional approach is still the best. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the opinion?

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Some people believe that Learner-Centred teaching is better than the conventional methods of teaching
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 the contemporary classrooms. I am quite inclined to the opinion and believe that experiential learning is the need of the hour. The classical methods of teaching always focused on the lecture format and examination. While the experiential learning targets hands on problem solving activity and a research project. The famous learning
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 describes the relationship between memory and time, illustrates that during a lecture, if your absorption rate is 100 percent on day
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 it comes down to only 3-4 percent at the end of thirty days.
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 theory is even more relevant in today’s scenario where the attention span has come down and learning is reduced. Undoubtedly, the Learner’s centred approach overcomes
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 situation. In my opinion, it is the future of learning as well teaching methodology.
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, it accelerates learning and ‘learning by doing’
moethods
a way of doing something, especially a systematic way; implies an orderly logical arrangement (usually in steps)
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 hand experience which helps in retaining the concepts. To conclude, I would say that experiential learning enables personalized study by effective assessment, teaching and learning strategies. It takes learning beyond the classroom and a student learns with his own pace.
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, it takes into account the specific needs of the students. The learners will face the real life situations and
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 the best way of learning.

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