in recent years, many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centres or malls to do their shopping. Is this a positive or a negative development?

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A majority of local shops are being closed in recent years due to the shift over by citizens to visit shopping malls and centres for their daily goods and shopping.
This
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trend is still continuing, and
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treat
this
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as a positive
phenominon
any state or process known through the senses rather than by intuition or reasoning
phenomenon
for
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in
soceity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
, as the
quality
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of goods can be assured with branded and renowned shopping malls.
First
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and foremostly, day to day
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
of citizens are being jeopardized due to
decremental
(sometimes followed by 'to') causing harm or injury
detrimental
quality
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of products in the market. The major source
for
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of
these goods are from local community shops established in every corner of streets. The profits generated from local shops have become a critical source of income for many local business owners. Decreasing the
quality
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of goods is
only way
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the only way
to get them the required profits.
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, local
shop keepers
a merchant who owns or manages a shop
shopkeepers
are bringing the
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hand material and goods from retail markets to sell at standard prices to the households.
On the other hand
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, due to consideration of
quality
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as an important factor, citizens are shifting over to big shopping malls to buy their goods.
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, large shopping malls established in populated areas are taking responsibility for the
quality
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of products and ready to replace them with new ones if found damaged.
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, people can plan their consumables at a time and can spend money on
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with a proper budget plan, so that they will be able to track their expenses for better financial management. To conclude, Even though, the bread and butter of the local shop owners are taken off by avoiding visits, encouraging people to visit shopping malls and branded showrooms make
lifes
a characteristic state or mode of living
lives
life
files
more hygiene and healthier. Alternatively,
Government
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the government
the Government
can plan and encourage for alternative business options to the local community shop owners for saving the health of citizens.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • retail outlets
  • consumer behavior
  • shop locally
  • convenience
  • variety
  • economic growth
  • job creation
  • community
  • personal touch
  • small businesses
  • local economy
  • big corporations
  • dependence
  • shopping habits
  • urbanization
  • globalization
  • competition
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