Some observers say that police officers should be recruited from the communities where they work, so that they have local knowledge. Other people say that this is unnecessary, or even undesirable. Where do you stand on this debate? Is local knowledge essential in modern policing?

The need for effective, trustworthy
police
officers is paramount in society today, especially as criminals become more devious and creative. Regarding whether
police
should be locally hired, there is a case to be made on both sides of the debate. Those who support local recruitment of officers point to the need for the
police
to understand the minutiae of the local
community
.
For example
, a
community
may have certain frictions or a history of a specific grievance, whether religious, political or
otherwise
. In
such
situations, the argument goes, the
police
need to show sensitivity, and
also
be able to anticipate the kinds of crimes that may be committed.
Furthermore
, local officers may find it easier to gain informants in the
community
, leading to stronger evidence at trials, higher conviction rates and a deterrent to crime through sentencing, imprisonment, fines or
community
service leading to rehabilitation of the offender.
On the other hand
, it seems likely that officers from the
community
may in fact share some of the tendencies of the people they grew up with.
For example
, in countries
such
as Mexico, we see a high incidence of corruption among the local business and government
community
which is equalled by bribery among the
police
. A
second
objection is that local sensitivity may lead to the
police
failing to enforce laws fully, and effectively making exceptions for some offenders, which is
unequitable
not equitable or fair
inequitable
unsuitable
towards law-abiding citizens.
Finally
, we must remember that
police
officers should have transferable skills,
such
as lateral thinking and investigative ability, which should transcend their background or the environment they are working in. Overall, it seems to me that local knowledge is not absolutely essential for the
police
, whose
skills
Suggestion
Skills
should be effective in any context. Indeed, I agree with those who say that the risks of local recruitment outweigh the benefits, because of the danger of corruption and over-familiarity with potential offenders.

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