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4. Online education is becoming more and more popular. Some people claim that e-learning has so many benefits that it will replace face-to-face education soon. Others say that traditional education is irreplaceable. Discuss both views and give your opinion. ( traditional methods of teaching versus the modern ones

#education #people #methods #ones
here
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Here
 is a robust argument that computers can efficiently and
precisely do
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precisely does
language
 conversions;
thus
, mastering
overseas
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an overseas language
language
 is no longer required with
this
 advancement. I completely disagree with the notion.
This
 essay will deeply
analyze
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
analyse
 the argument and render the best verdict out of it.
Firstly
, overseas
languages broaden
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languages, broaden
 a person’s horizon because
language
 represents the culture of a country.
Traveling
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Travelling
 has remarkably increased these days and daily people are encountered with
wide range
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a wide range
 of languages.
Hence
,
language
 barrier refrains a person from indulging into a specific culture. A
succinate
briefly giving the gist of something
succinct
 example proclaiming
this
; In Germany, people around tend to feel home sick due to constraint put up
by
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with
language
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the language
 of a country resulting in boredom rather than enjoyment.
However
, without the knowledge of a local
language
 one cannot expand his social circle and here,
role
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the role
 of computer for
language
 culled
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from
 the real world.
Secondly
, knowledge of foreign languages is imperative in multiple businesses. These-days trade has no boundaries as expanding the world over,
hence
 to compete with the international business, being multilingual is of utmost importance for an effective customer and company relationship. For illustration, in Pakistan, thousands of foreigners pay visit to tourist places every year, which requires spontaneous verbal skills and it completely extirpate the efficiency of computers.
In other words
, for communication in business, there is no room for translation and individuals must have proficiency in
languagee
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the language
language
languages
 in order to guide and explain properly. To conclude,
this
 essay argued why considering foreign linguistics is a waste of time is completely preposterous, while in actual it is
investment
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an investment
 of time because it results in gaining enormous experience and it flourish business.

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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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