In many western countries there is an increasing number of couples choosing to have no children. What are the advantages and disadvantages to couples having no children?

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Nowadays, in most parts of world couples who are opting to have no child has been brewing rapidly.
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phenomenon has both
advantanges
the quality of having a superior or more favorable position
advantages
and disadvantages which
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refers to the speaker or writer
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will discuss in
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subsequently
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subsequent
paragraphs. On commence with advantages,
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decsions
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decision
decisions
helps the couples to get a
sucess
an event that accomplishes its intended purpose
success
in their profession because they do not
worring
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worry
worrying
wring
about their children and they can fully concentrate on their
carrer
the particular occupation for which you are trained
career
carrier
careers
without in
distrubance
activity that is a malfunction, intrusion, or interruption
disturbance
in life.
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, female safe from various
diganosis
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diagnoses
diagnosis
which sometimes they
faces
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face
after child
birth
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birth, such
such
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as
obseity
more than average fatness
obesity
, blood
presure
the force applied to a unit area of surface; measured in pascals (SI unit) or in dynes (cgs unit)
pressure
excetra
more than is needed, desired, or required
extra
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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