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Some people think that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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art
the products of human creativity; works of art collectively
Art
 is a key component in a
socaity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
,
Accept space
,
some
figurs
a diagram or picture illustrating textual material
figures
figure
 that money spent on the arts are wasted and isn't a good
invesment
the act of investing; laying out money or capital in an enterprise with the expectation of profit
investment
 by the government
,
Accept space
,
this
 essay
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
 will discuss how funds that
funnls
a conical shape with a wider and a narrower opening at the two ends
funnels
 into the arts are actually
inhancing
increase
enhancing
 the
economy not the other
Suggestion
economy, not the other
 way around.
people
Suggestion
People
 these days like to travel in the
qeust
a search for an alternative that meets cognitive criteria
quest
cost
 of seeing something
intersting
arousing or holding the attention
interesting
 and beautiful to look at, and these things are only created by artists
infact
Suggestion
in fact
 many countries has built their economy around art and the
tourtstis
someone who travels for pleasure
tourists
 that come to see it
for example
rome
the leadership of the Roman Catholic Church
Rome
 and
paris
the capital and largest city of France; and international center of culture and commerce
Paris
.
on
Suggestion
In
On
addtion
a component that is added to something to improve it
addition
 to that
poeple
Suggestion
person
people
on
Suggestion
in
 the
soacity
an extended social group having a distinctive cultural and economic organization
society
 will prosper and be more
innavative
ahead of the times
innovative
 and more in touch with
thier
of them or themselves
their
 creative side a study was conducted in 2010 that said if every single day you pass by a painting and sit to admire it your mood will be better and more relaxed. in conclusion art needs to be everywhere and more money must go in that way
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  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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