Some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future, such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both these views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

University students to be given
with
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to
the freedom of choosing their
intrested
having or showing interest; especially curiosity or fascination or concern
interested
subjects to study to excel in their career. Part of the citizens obey
this
, but the others opine that they should choose only
technology
or science based subjects as these courses are going to be
help
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helping
them in future career. As far as my opinion is
concerned they
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concerned, they
should be given
with
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to
the freedom of choice to choose their interested subjects.
This
essay will discuss both the views with relevant examples. On the
first
hand, as per the present market trends and demand there are several opportunities are being offered across the globe in different verticals other than
technology
and
scientific
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science
sciences
.
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.
Due to the globalization, the travel, food and tourism industries are gaining their presence in the market and providing challenging opportunities to younger generations.
For instance
, there is a substantial growth of 30% is recorded in the above mentioned industry markets in the
last
3 years, which is a positive sign for the students who are opting courses in these subjects.
on
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On
the other hand, I agree, there are plenty of opportunities available on the technical front. A majority of universities are giving preference in providing
required infrastructure
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the required infrastructure
in these courses only, so that the students are coming out of colleges with
requied
practical knowledge to crack a job. But, if all the students opt for only
technology
and science based courses, there could be a chance for the scarcity of jobs.
For instance
, in India, every year on an average one
lakh
engineering students are being graduated out of universities.
but
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But
, only 60% of the students are able to get
job
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jobs
,
rest
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the rest
of the students are choosing non technical jobs for survival. To conclude, as there is
a
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an
equal growth observed across different other verticals, students should be given with a choice of choosing their interested subject
.
Accept space
.
Rather than, pushing them to opt only
technology
and science based subjects, which might lead to a scarcity of jobs in that industry.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • foster
  • engagement
  • excel
  • innovative contributions
  • diversity in research
  • well-rounded education
  • broad perspectives
  • critical thinking skills
  • mental well-being
  • burnout
  • forced academic paths
  • job-ready
  • skills shortages
  • tech-driven economy
  • employment rates
  • changing job market
  • utilitarian subjects
  • aptitudes
  • wasting talent
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