Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

#government #decisions #people #lifestyle

Nowadays, since we are living in a

countries

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country

, which are ruled by authorized people, most of the decisions, regardless of the life area, are made by them.

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more and more people opine that it is their democratic right, which enables them to make decisions

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(of quantities) imprecise but fairly close to correct

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their lifestyles.

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why in

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essay I am going to provide several arguments in

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(military) military action or resources protecting a country against potential enemies

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statement.

To begin

with, since the government's main task is to

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work for

the

wellfare

governmental provision of economic assistance to persons in need

welfare

of the population, politicians should take into consideration people's opinions and demands, before taking important decisions. In

this

way

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people's

complaint will be satisfied and living standards will sour significantly.

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if the government

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asks

people how

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much should

cost public transport tickets, people will suggest a price

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appropriate for

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their

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earnings.

Secondly

, if local councils enable citizens to determine how many recycling

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a container; usually has a lid

bins

should be in a neighbourhood, recycling will become more popular with people. The reason is that by having more places to recycle, city dwellers will be more motivated to

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continue a certain state, condition, or activity

continue

doing so and in

this

way they will be part of the solution to the urging problem about garbage disposal.

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it is important to point out one bottleneck of people making decisions about their

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local councils

. Because

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government

governments

government's

workers are well-educated in specific areas, connected to citizen's lifestyle, they are more likely to make a better and smarter decision.

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forbidding the sale of alcohol and cigarettes to juveniles is important restriction, regarding the health of youngsters. To conclude, I believe that even though the government of a country is enabled to make important decisions about the way of living of the whole nation, citizens should be given the chance to use their

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characterized by or advocating or based upon the principles of democracy or social equality

democratic

right and share their opinions.

Thu Dec 26 2019

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Should government make decisions about people's lifestyle, or should people make their own decisions?

Fully explain your ideas

Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Learning English at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out. In your opinion, is it important for everyone to learn English? Should we try to ensure the survival of local languages and, if so, how?

Some people say that schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the Internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In some countries more and more people are becoming interested in finding out bout the history of the house or building they live in.

Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary schools. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?