More and more are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work? What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

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Since we are living in a modern world, which developing process is never-ending, people should be able to keep up with the innovations

inorder

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in order

to make ends meet.

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, the majority of the population

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in villages

relocate

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relocates

cities

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the cities

, because of the greater variety of job opportunities.

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, I tend to believe that

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is going to be crucial for agriculture and

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why in

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essay I am going

tosuggest

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to suggest

several solutions

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to this

development

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with, the government of a

country

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should increase the budget, which is related

tothe

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to the

development

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of villages. Fore example, if the government built more facilities for local dwellers, they would have the opportunity not to fall behind from the citizens.

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, people would have more knowledge and will be motivated to help

theivillage

a film or illustrated lecture on traveling

travelogue

the ivillage

fourish

grow vigorously

flourish

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by working

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it.

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, agriculture is vital for the economy of a

country

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, if there are not enough workers in

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sector, it would not be possible for a

country

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functionate

(mathematics) a mathematical relation such that each element of a given set (the domain of the function) is associated with an element of another set (the range of the function)

functioned

properly.

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, if there are not enough farmers, who to breed animals and to produce

siary

provoking fear or terror

scary

and meat products, the

country

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's population will face shortage of vital for their wellbeing food items.

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means that the only option will be the exportation of food from foreign countries, which logically

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leads to more

epensive

high in price or charging high prices

expensive

food.

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if more

peopl

(plural) any group of human beings (men or women or children) collectively

people

relocate

tocities

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to cities

, the process of urbanization

eill

the capability of conscious choice and decision and intention

will

be significantly increased.

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, cities will be

sonstantly

without variation or change, in every case

constantly

instantly

sprawling and at some point-will become over-populated.

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, many ethical and environmental problems will occur,

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as lost of national identity and air pollution.

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, it is important

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to point

out

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that if

more people become city dwellers, it will be more likely for a

country

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to concentrate on technological

development

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rather than on agricultural

development

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, there will be new inventions, which will help people to deal with the exhausting work, related to the agricultural sector. To conclude, I tend to believe

thaht

pointing out something

that

not only the economy of a

country

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will suffer if more people relocate to

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country

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the country

, but

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the all population will face serious issues.

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, I think that by taking into consideration what I

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have mentioned

above, many future problems will be avoided.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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364 words

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More and more are moving away from an agricultural background to relocate to cities in order to look for work? What will be consequences of this? What solutions can you offer?

Fully explain your ideas

Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons for and the solutions to this situation?

Some people say that parent should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own discuss both opinions and give your opinion ?

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Some people think that in order to deal with the problem of congestion in cities, privately owned vehicles should be banned in city centers, while others consider this to be an unrealistic solution. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

There is an idea, according to which that with more and more people using the internet and messaging, the communication in the real world will cease to exist.