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Some people think that e-books are better to be used for education in order to go paperless. Discuss its advantages and disadvantages. Give your own opinion.

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It is argued by many that e-books are the solution for paper-free education. I agree with
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 notion and consider modern as well as effective teaching technique a major advantage
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 to electronic devices like mobile and laptops to be a principal disadvantage. Nowadays, many institutions are moving towards a paperless approach to education with the help of modern-day technology like e-books.
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, it saves tons of paper as there is no more need to print millions of books, which helps prevent deforestation and save the environment.
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, since the content of those books is now available digitally, it is very compact and easy to
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 on electronic devices like mobiles and laptops.
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, The students now don't need to carry those heavy books everywhere,
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, they can
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 it when and wherever they want on their mobile phones.
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, Amazon has already begun converting traditional paper books to e-books due to its increasing popularity and easy
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, it poses the threat of the growth of addiction towards the
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 of these electronic devices among the students. Since the books will
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 only be available digitally, the several hours spent in front of these devices will increase much, which may in turn damage the visibility of young children, leading them to the
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 of spectacles.
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, some students may find it difficult to study on mobile phones as they may get distracted to social media. Take
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 as, when I read an article on the internet, some social media notification pops-up resulting in distraction. In conclusion, even though e-books may accelerate addiction to mobile phones, I believe there are greater advantages to it
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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