In many modern societies, grandchildren rarely spend any quality time with their grandparents. What do you think are the consequences of this?

Since the beginning of the 21st century, people have changed their lifestyle, where most of them now live in big cities. Some people believe that these movements will prevent grandparents from spending time with their grandchildren, so they assume
this
will suppress transferring traditions and habits from the upper generation to the lower generation, while others argue that
this
will improve
people
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peoples'
characters.
This
essay will discuss the consequences of stopping the meeting between the grandchildren and their grandparents.
Firstly
, the major consequence of
this
phenomenon is the heritage will not move to the following generation. Some families have
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
special traditions which present the symbols of their families.
For example
, in Jordan, due to lack of meeting between the grandparents and the grandchildren, the youth
do not speak
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does not speak
the language of their grandparents.
Therefore
, it
this
will lead to losing the cultures and heritages of some families.
On the other hand
, stop meeting between grandchildren and their grandparent will lead to
enhancing
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enhanced
some characters.
Grandchildren will
Accept comma addition
Grandchildren, will
improve their characters based on their surroundings rather than their traditions.
For example
, grandchildren in Jordan now they learn new habits which are suitable for their environment.
Thus
, preventing the meeting between grandparents and grandchildren will have a good consequence. In conclusion, spending little time with grandparents could have either a positive or a negative consequence. In my opinion, I believe that heritages and traditions are very important.
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