WRITING TASK 2 You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic: Every country has poor people and every country has different ways of dealing with the poor. What are some of the reasons for world poverty? How can the poor be helped? Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Nowadays, world poverty is not as severe as it used to in the
last
decade, but some of the development countries still face to solve
this
problem. Some research indicates that ‘dilemma of poverty’ comes from the lack of
education
and
unindequation
in sex. The shortage of
education
leads to the shortage of choices in finding suitable paid
works
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work
. Simple jobs like handy works are paid cheaper than skilled works. Money they earned is used to buy only for their own basic livings and no more for
education
.
Then
it backwards to the shortage of
education
. Poverty still comes in its round. My resolutions of the poverty in the
development
Suggestion
developing
developed
country governments are:
First
of all, reduce the difference in salary incomes of male and female labours. Though they have the same
education
level, men are often paid better than women.
Therefore
, the economy
is less less
Suggestion
is less
attractive to the
second
half of the world people who are still alive. If the unemployment is developed, the poverty,
therefore
, is raised.
Second
of all, pay more in
education
development, especially in the
rurals
living in or characteristic of farming or country life
rural
,
the farther
Suggestion
the farthest
sides of the country which hardly touch with more attention to the female girls and women.
Last
but not least, give some assistances to some chosen areas which women are used more than men
such
as traditional works like handicrafts, smal
l agricutur
a large-scale farming enterprise
agriculture
agricultures
es or textiles…

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