Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on their planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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Since we are living in a galaxy, which is full with planets, it is

logically

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logical

to believe that human-beings are not the only form of intelligence in space.

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, many great minds opine that the mankind will benefit if it try to make a contact with them.

Controversely

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Controversially

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, other scholars tend to believe that it would be dangerous and bad.

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, I think that both points of view are correct and

that is

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why in

this

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essay I will provide several proofs of these statements.

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with, it is apparent that living in a modern world, which developing process is never-ending, requires many resources. What I mean is that there should be enough well-educated

workers, who to

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workers, who

invent new machines and technologies.

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, it is not always possible for people to come up with an innovative idea and

thus

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-they need help.

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, if we manage to communicate with other intelligent forms, we would be able to solve the challenges and problems on Earth, by using their advice.

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Accept space

being in a contact with other intelligent forms will enable us to predict important events in the future

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as natural disasters and wars.

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, the well known Cambridge physician Stephen Hawking in his book "The brief history of time" stated that

alliens

not contained in or deriving from the essential nature of something

aliens

alliance

alien

Accept space

creatures which live on Mars

Accept space

would help the mankind to relocate

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another planet if it need to do so.

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there are many benefits of sending messages to other smart creatures in space, it is important to point out one important bottleneck. Since humans are trying to progress in many fields, they are constantly

exploitating

use or manipulate to one's advantage

exploiting

the Earth resources.

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, other intelligent forms may try to stop people from conquering other planets in order to preserve them.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

287 words

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extraterrestrial
investigate
interstellar
speculate
communication
primitive
potential
collaboration
unlock
unprecedented
advancement
caution
consequences
hostile
unknowingly
civilization
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Some scientists think that there are intelligent life forms on their planets and messages should be sent to contact them. Other scientists think it is a bad idea and would be dangerous. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Fully explain your ideas

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