Some people think it is more important to spend public money on promoting a healthy lifestyle in order to prevent illness than to spend it on the treatment for people who are already ill. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

People have different

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views

with regards to where would be a good place for government to allocate public fund to improve public

health

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. While there are several reasons to prioritize a healthy lifestyle, I would argue that the treatments of people who are already suffering from illness are far more important. On the one hand, promoting a healthy lifestyle is worth investing in any government. The sedentary routines which are steam from lack of physical activities put many people at high risk for modern diseases. In fact, there are a growing number of young people being

obesity

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obese

since they did not spend time engaging in outdoor activities.

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, allocating public funds to build new leisure and sports

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health campaign

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a health campaign

could raise public awareness about how to keep fit and healthy, which would be a contributing factor to increase the general level of public

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. To be more specific, doing exercise and following a balanced diet on a regular basis could prevent citizens from being an illness in the long run.

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, I would believe that it is a must to place an emphasis on

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treating

people who are already being ill.

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, there are some dangerous illnesses that could not prevent and could not avoid due to the lack of vaccination. There were a billion of people who are in a life-threatening situation saving lives thanks to the

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advancement

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health

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care systems.

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, unhealthy lifestyle could not be a main root

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of

all illnesses that people face today. In fact, living in contaminated air as well as consuming position food and drink could be the key factors influencing the significant escalate in public diseases. If governments are not able to deal with these issues, it could lead to detrimental impacts on society. In conclusion,

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promoting a

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better

living style is important, I firmly think that the emphasis should be put on the treatment illnesses.