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You have a friend who lives in a city abroad. You have decided that you would like to apply to do a course at one of the colleges in this city. Write to your friend explaining what you would like to do. Tell him/her what type of work or studies you have been doing for the past few years and ask for assistance in contacting an appropriate institution.

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Dear X How are you? I am very much glad that I am writing you back, though, we met each other no longer than 2 months before but it feels me much longer. Anyway, the main reason behind writing the letter is to inform you that I am planning to study a one year diploma course on professional IT-Technician at any reputed colleges or institutions at your city As you already know that after graduation I am doing a job in the field of IT Technology, but, what I feel is that to get a good promotion at the workplace I need to complete a professional course in
this
 field so that not only for getting right promotion but
also
 to complete higher level IT related task by enriching my practical knowledge as well. Unfortunately, I have less time regarding searching all the best colleges/institutions located a
t
Suggestion
in
your city as admission session is already becoming finish.
Therefore
, I would be very glad if you could assist me to point out the best college/institution and admission criteria as soon as possible or alternatively, you could send me the E- Prospectus of the selected college/institution according to my email address,
moreover
, I have already sent out my educational qualification and necessary job experience certificate to your email address. Ok, my dear friend, today up to
this
. I look forward to hearing from very soon. Best wishes,
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