You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic. Buying things on the Internet, such as books, air tickets and groceries, is becoming more and more popular. Do the advantages of shopping in this way outweigh the disadvantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should write at least 250 words.

In
this
era of the 21st-century,
internet
has become part and parcel of every flesh and blood's life.
Internet
Suggestion
The internet
has helped people to connect themselves with the world. Buying things on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
has become popular these days and has become a business too. People have become
more fond
Suggestion
fonder
of buying over
internet
Suggestion
the internet
. The generation today has become more time cautious.
Therefore
, people tend to buy things online. The variety of choices available to people has made
this
more popular. The online shopping gives people advantage of buying anything, anytime and anywhere. Over and above, the richest person (Jeff Bezos) in the world today is an online seller. So, it has
also
become a good business too.
People
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The people
of the
millenial
Suggestion
millennial
Millenial
generation
has beccome
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have become
has become
has became
focused more on
internet
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the internet
for everything. They can buy books online, book air tickets etc. But, by doing
so we
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so, we
also
put ourselves in hot water. Buying on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
has made us lethargic.
This
has affected our physical health. The upcoming generation
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
.e. GEN Z is predicted to be more lazy. Over and above, using
internet
Suggestion
the internet
has made our cities full of radiation. The way we are developing is having very adverse effects on our environment. Out and out, like every lock has its own key,
this
problem
also
has its own solution. As the consumer awareness is increasing day by day. There is a possibility of getting people on the right track. According to me, we should not rely only on
internet
Suggestion
the internet
, we should move out and explore world ourselves.
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