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#concernd
Inspite
Suggestion
In spite
 of health warning, a huge public start to smoke all around the globe. Which is
incrrasing
becoming greater or larger
increasing
 pollution in our environment as
well diseases
Suggestion
well as diseases such as
such
 as cancer, lungs
isuues
Suggestion
issuers'
issues
 and
breathewe
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breathe, we
breathe we
 should
b
have the quality of being; (copula, used with an adjective or a predicate noun)
be
 a part of that campaign where we can aware the public in order to get rid off from
this
 addiction. How could we reduce the
usage
Suggestion
use
 of cigarette for saving our young generation. As we heard health is wealth, we should take away from these
type
Suggestion
types
 of drugs.
Although
 alcohol and other type of drugs are more
dangerous but
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dangerous, but
 tobacco is
also
 harmful as scientists researched. It can be the cause of cancer, lungs and affected
to
Suggestion
in
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 parts of the body. The smoke of cigarette
distub
Suggestion
disturbs
disturb
disturbed
 people in public place. Government should provide
seprate
act as a barrier between; stand between
separate
 areas for smoking as
given
Suggestion
are given
 in other countries
on
Suggestion
in
 order to prevent usage in that type of places where family and friends stay or get together. While
,
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,
government should emboss tax in order to make it
expensive which
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expensive, which
 will not affordable for everyone and a bunch of people will leave it. The
another
not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
other
 criteria can be
this
 we should aware public and tell all the disadvantages to
people how
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people, how
 does it make you ill as well unhealthy. To sum up, the government should take
step
Suggestion
steps
 against smokers who smokes in public areas. It should be banned in our country to make free from
this
 drug to our child and adults

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • important
  • affects
  • care
  • difference
  • motivated
  • action
  • address
  • awareness
  • educate
  • attitude
  • collaboration
  • groups
  • organizations
  • solution
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