Some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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The evolution of
life
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is a structured phenomena which had
occured
come to pass
occurred
, for nearly a billion years from now. It is a complex transformation, that we have evolved right from the homo
sapien our
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sapiens, our
sapiens our
sharpen our
anchestor
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
ancestor
to a fully developed human race that we are today. The human has fully evolved in its physical and mental stage, he might not be physically strong
enough but
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enough, but
he is definitely mentally strong, because of which he is a dominant species of
this
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world. Our
anchestors
someone from whom you are descended (but usually more remote than a grandparent)
ancestors
ancestor
has lived
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have lived
lived
their
life
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and have learnt about
this
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world much better than we have learnt it till date. We are lucky enough that all the experience of their
life
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is been preserved
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has been preserved
is being preserved
and stored for our reference. The
vedic
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Vedic
maths is still the best version of solving any mathematical problems and is used in many computers which are the innovation of the present. The progress in the space science is
also
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referred from the ancient
astrology which
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astrology, which
was written thousand of
year
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years
before. I am convinced that the future innovations are
next
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to impossible without
reffering
something offered (as a proposal or bid)
offering
the history. One can only reach to the top of his
life
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or occupation, only if he has learnt from its history.

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