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Government should spend more money on railway than road. To what extent do you agree?

#government #money #railway #road
I want wanted to say that, people are very
good but
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good, but
 I do not think they are doing good now a days.During the 1830s and 1840s,
Morpeth
 became a major river port due to its favourable location. Produce, leather goods and timber were brought to
Morpeth
 from inland New South Wales and shipped down the Hunter River to the coast and
then
 to Sydney.
However
, in 1870 a railway line reached the town, and the importance of river shipping began to decline. Today,
Morpeth
, with its beautiful old buildings, is a popular tourist destination. The best way to
sec
try to locate or discover, or try to establish the existence of
search
seek
soak
Morpeth
 is to take the
Morpeth
 Heritage Walk.
This
 covers about three kilometres, and takes visitors past many beautiful historic buildings. Starting at Fig Tree Hill, which has picnic facilities, stroll past the Surgeon’s Cottage, built in 1845, formerly home of the local doctor, now shops. From there you will come to
Morpeth
 Bridge, erected in 1870, which replaced a ferry boat. Opposite it on the right is the Courthouse, still in use today. Continue your walk past the historic railway station,
then
 turn
into
to on
onto
 George Street. Stroll past gracious houses until you come to the Church of the Immaculate Conception on your right, built of bricks made in Gosford. Continuing up George Street, you come to the shopping district where you can browse through the shops or stop for refreshment. Your tour of
Morpeth
 finishes
at
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in
magnificent Closebourne House
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the magnificent Closebourne House
, built in 1826 by Lieutenant Edward Close.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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