Nowadays larger distance are travelled by people to work and study on a daily basis. Some consider it to be a negative development while others disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
Is it bad to commute to distant places, interact with a wider range of people of different neighbouring towns and cities? If people earn a position or
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and study has a significant positive effect on one's mental and Use synonyms
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growth and knowledge and especially helps in achieving challenging goals.
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, travelling long distances for a good Linking Words
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better environment broadens one's horizon of knowledge and significantly enriches personal learning experience. Most of the times, a big school or company offering better quality education and higher position, are not located within a close vicinity. These kind of institutions are comparatively less in number. Use synonyms
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, prestigious Universities like Oxford and Cambridge provide excellent education and it is quite natural that students from far and wide places will flock here to get a quality education and degree. It is very foolish to let go Linking Words
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, in the workplace and school, a Linking Words
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healthy interaction breaks many stereotypes and makes a Linking Words
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, some of the most developed places are those where people from far off places commute for their Linking Words
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, people from different parts of the UK come to London to Linking Words
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, some commute daily from neighbouring towns like Brighton or Surrey, while others have migrated from distant cities like Edinburgh and Manchester. London provides a multicultural environment which brings people of different culture, ages, race together under a single roof and clearly London is the most developed cities in the UK and Europe. Travelling long distances has a notable positive impact on the progress of people and a country as a whole.
With modern advancements in technologies, faster and advanced modes of transport are available everywhere, which helps to cover long distances within a short span of time. Subways, trains, bullet trains, buses, monorails have made life and commuting much easier, comfortable and quicker. Use synonyms
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, London is connected by an extensive network of subway which links distant parts of the city and passengers can cover several kilometres comfortably within few minutes. Travelling is not a big hassle and time consuming like it used to be in the past.
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, to conclude, I strongly disagree that travelling larger distances for Linking Words
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