Some people think that government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Arts, it is a
crtical
marked by a tendency to find and call attention to errors and flaws
critical
thing in our lives.We live in a world that arts
plays
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play
immportint role
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an important role
important role
for
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in
ducmenteing
writing that provides information (especially information of an official nature)
documenting
history
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or even
essntial
absolutely necessary; vitally necessary
essential
essentially
part of our
humen
characteristic of humanity
human
momentes
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moment
moments
movements
.I
personily
as yourself
personally
disagree with people who feels that it is a
wast
spend thoughtlessly; throw away
waste
waist
vast
of money we need to have more attention to our
history
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to let the other
genration
all the people living at the same time or of approximately the same age
generation
generations
of human knowing the
history
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behaind
further back than; at the back of; at the far side of
behind
each
art
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by
bileding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
blending
museom
Suggestion
a museum
museum
museums
and to allow
expirts
a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully
experts
expertise
exports
to study more about
arts
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the arts
that belong to
melione
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
million
years.
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, give
apportonity
a possibility due to a favorable combination of circumstances
opportunity
opportunities
to people around the
worled
everything that exists anywhere
world
to
vist
go to see a place, as for entertainment
visit
and
discaver
discover or determine the existence, presence, or fact of
discover
discovery
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history
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the history
fro an
arts
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art
.That it is done by
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goverment which
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government, which
government which
will take a tax from people and
bilde
make by combining materials and parts
build
bid
bold
museom
a depository for collecting and displaying objects having scientific or historical or artistic value
museums
and
symposymes
a meeting or conference for the public discussion of some topic especially one in which the participants form an audience and make presentations
symposiums
that
consered
a performance of music by players or singers not involving theatrical staging
concert
of
arts
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the arts
in that
countery
a politically organized body of people under a single government
country
will gain more profit from visiting people and to
recored
anything (such as a document or a phonograph record or a photograph) providing permanent evidence of or information about past events
record
the
history
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for
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of
this
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art
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.
For
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example before
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example, before
ten years,
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
go to
england were
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England, where
England were
England where
england where
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
found the
history
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beilding
a structure that has a roof and walls and stands more or less permanently in one place
building
have been saved until today with very good
shap
any spatial attributes (especially as defined by outline)
shape
shop
soup
and there was an
arts
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art
in every corner of
streat
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the street
street
a street
streets
.
Seconed
Suggestion
Second
, make an area for
expirts
a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully
experts
expertise
to study and
examen
consider in detail and subject to an analysis in order to discover essential features or meaning
examine
all the old arts.As we know
behaind
further back than; at the back of; at the far side of
behind
every
art
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there are story and to know that story we need to have
expirts
a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully
experts
expertise
to
tells
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tell
why
,
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,
who and where
this
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arts come from.For
examble before
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example, before
example before
seven years, in
eygpit
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there was an
art
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of
eygption
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king but
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king, but
the people of that area not
consern
feeling or showing worry or solicitude
concerned
about it and they try to sell it for
small amount
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a small amount
of
mony
the most common medium of exchange; functions as legal tender
money
.For good thing the
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
hire
exiprts
a person with special knowledge or ability who performs skillfully
experts
in
eygtion
Suggestion
art
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and they found
this
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belong to the
first
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eygption
Suggestion
family which
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family, which
can not
can not
cannot
be done without money from
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
. In sum, I feel
people most support
Suggestion
most people support
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goverment
the organization that is the governing authority of a political unit
government
in spending money in an
arts
Suggestion
art
that for save
there
of them or themselves
their
history
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and
also
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know more about the story
behined
further back than; at the back of; at the far side of
behind
each
art
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.

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  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
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  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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