Wealthy countries should accept more refugees and provide them with basic assistance, such as food and housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is argued by some that the asylum seeker should be provided shelter and daily basic needs by developed nations. I completely agree with
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Accepting refugees could be beneficial to that country and that person as well. Linking Words
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some countries are wealthy, they are still facing other issues like population. Linking Words
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, Canada and New Zealand have so less population. In Canada, there are only 36 million citizens. Linking Words
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problem may put them on the verge of extinction of humans. By accepting these people, these countries can boost their rate of population and immigrants will get shelter too. Later, they will work for some company and rate of unemployment will reduce as well.
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, if these countries will start hiring skilled refugees, they can make big positive impact on their nation. Linking Words
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, so many CEO of prominent companies is from other countries Linking Words
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as Google, MSN, Master-Card etc. These workers can boost economy of their province, so the people of that region would get more public facility like free electricity, free internet and so many other facilities. A recent study of displaced persons is conducted by the University of Alberta shows that South Africa, which has the most numbers of refugees in compare to others, has the highest quality of education.
To conclude, accepting abandoned people, not only the economy of that country rises, but those people gets new life to live. The nation and refugees will grow together.Linking Words
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite