Some people think it's better t choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In my country, making friends is very important. Especially in
childhood parents
always emphasize that have a good choice to meet new friends. Accept comma addition
childhood, parents
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Therefore people
are looking for Accept comma addition
Therefore, people
good person
who has similar opinion and follows them without conflict. Suggestion
a good person
good people
Obiously
Suggestion
Obviously
this
relationship is pretty stable. Linking Words
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However I
prefer to make friends who have Accept comma addition
However, I
variaty
personality and a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
thoghts
which could make me the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thoughts
uncomportable
.
When I was a conducive to or feeling mental discomfort
uncomfortable
callege
student, I suddenly realised that my friends are the body of faculty and students of a college
college
quiet
similar to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
with
me. We never fight each otherSuggestion
to
,
even it was Accept space
,
rare
Suggestion
a rare situation
situation
to have different ideas. An advantage of Use synonyms
this
friendship is that everything is easy to make Linking Words
dicitions
. I know what friends want and they the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
also
understand what I want. Linking Words
Otherwise
the advantage could be still disadvantage too. After Linking Words
few years
with Suggestion
a few years
this
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situation
, I felt kind of boring and sometimes Use synonyms
I
desire to new experience.
of me or myself
my
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Otherwise people
who have different opinions are able to give me Accept comma addition
Otherwise, people
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
sights
. Suggestion
sight
For example
, I was working in trade company and wanted to something special that could be Linking Words
new wind
for my life. At that time most of my friends understood my Suggestion
the new wind
situation
and they tried to cheer me up, but they did not any advices. Use synonyms
Becase
they were Suggestion
Because
also
in Linking Words
similar
Suggestion
a similar situation
similar situations
situation
. One day I met a friend who was my classmate in college and she loved to try new experience. She Use synonyms
recommanded
to go to abroad to learn totally different culture and ways to live push for something
recommended
instead
of stay in boring circumstance. Linking Words
That is
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way
I am here in New Zealand. I am sure that was the greatest idea and my life changed 180 percent in Suggestion
the way
good way
.
Like Suggestion
a good way
the good way
good ways
this
, having opposite opinions Linking Words
also
could be helpful and though sometimes make more nice decision. Of course I love to spend time with friends who always agree with me. It is Linking Words
compotable
and released. providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
compatible
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However I
believe that I need motivations Accept comma addition
However, I
requarly
to to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
equally
challege
in the body of faculty and students of a college
college
new world
. In right time, different ideas could help me out from ordinary circumstance.Suggestion
the new world
a new world
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