Some people think it's better t choose friends who always have the same opinions as them. Other people believe it's good to have friends who sometimes disagree with them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

In my country, making friends is very important. Especially in
childhood parents
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childhood, parents
always emphasize that have a good choice to meet new friends.
Therefore people
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Therefore, people
are looking for
good person
Suggestion
a good person
good people
who has similar opinion and follows them without conflict.
Obiously
Suggestion
Obviously
this
relationship is pretty stable.
However I
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However, I
prefer to make friends who have
variaty
a collection containing a variety of sorts of things
variety
personality and
thoghts
the content of cognition; the main thing you are thinking about
thoughts
which could make me
uncomportable
conducive to or feeling mental discomfort
uncomfortable
. When I was a
callege
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
student, I suddenly realised that my friends are
quiet
to a degree (not used with a negative)
quite
similar
with
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to
me. We never fight each other
,
Accept space
,
even it was
rare
Suggestion
a rare situation
situation
to have different ideas. An advantage of
this
friendship is that everything is easy to make
dicitions
the act of making up your mind about something
decisions
. I know what friends want and they
also
understand what I want.
Otherwise
the advantage could be still disadvantage too. After
few years
Suggestion
a few years
with
this
situation
, I felt kind of boring and sometimes
I
of me or myself
my
desire to new experience.
Otherwise people
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Otherwise, people
who have different opinions are able to give me
an other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
sights
Suggestion
sight
.
For example
, I was working in trade company and wanted to something special that could be
new wind
Suggestion
the new wind
for my life. At that time most of my friends understood my
situation
and they tried to cheer me up, but they did not any advices.
Becase
Suggestion
Because
they were
also
in
similar
Suggestion
a similar situation
similar situations
situation
. One day I met a friend who was my classmate in college and she loved to try new experience. She
recommanded
push for something
recommended
to go to abroad to learn totally different culture and ways to live
instead
of stay in boring circumstance.
That is
way
Suggestion
the way
I am here in New Zealand. I am sure that was the greatest idea and my life changed 180 percent in
good way
Suggestion
a good way
the good way
good ways
. Like
this
, having opposite opinions
also
could be helpful and though sometimes make more nice decision. Of course I love to spend time with friends who always agree with me. It is
compotable
providing or experiencing physical well-being or relief
comfortable
compatible
and released.
However I
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However, I
believe that I need motivations
requarly
to the same degree (often followed by 'as')
equally
to
challege
the body of faculty and students of a college
college
in
new world
Suggestion
the new world
a new world
. In right time, different ideas could help me out from ordinary circumstance.

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  • bond
  • support
  • unconditional love
  • shared values
  • mutual understanding
  • trust
  • emotional well-being
  • interdependence
  • societal norms
  • companionship
  • loyalty
  • advice
  • experiences
  • mentorship
  • trustworthy
  • reliable
  • reliable
  • cherish
  • strengthen
  • deepen
  • attach importance to
  • prioritize
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