The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise. To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements.

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Establishment of bonding among different people regardless their location is resulted by invention of social sites.
However
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, it has
also
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developed consequences like decreased face to face interaction and verbal communication.
This
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essay agrees with the statement that
such
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development enables people to connect with each other despite of distance
Firstly
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,
myaraid
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a myriad
myriad
the myriad
of social networking sites are acting as a
media
Suggestion
medium
via which messages are transmitted among communicators.
In addition
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to
this
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, shared information can be delivered to
recievers
set that receives radio or tv signals
receivers
recover
within microseconds from each and every corner of
world
Suggestion
the world
.
For instance
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,
enterprenurs
someone who organizes a business venture and assumes the risk for it
entrepreneurs
enterprises
are using online media for business meeting, contract and conference.
This
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has resulted in developments of business link
also
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.
Secondly
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,
deveopment
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the development
development
of technology
are
Suggestion
is also narrowing
also
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narrowing the world. People living far apart from each other can
also
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communicate with each other through different online applications.
Moreover
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,
such
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interventions lead towards benefits
such
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as quicker, reliable and confidential transmission of
message
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messages
a message
the message
.
For instance
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: other means of communication
such
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as letter
is
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are
time consuming and less
relevent
having a bearing on or connection with the subject at issue
relevant
in
comparision
the act of examining resemblances
comparison
to
this
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. In conclusion, my opinion regarding the benefits of
internet
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the internet
such
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as long distance intimacy and relationship among people
far outweigh
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far outweighs
its cons like decreased empathy and reduced emotion.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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